Kestrel & Pane · Boards Department · Rev. 04

The Nightjar Sequence

Forty-one seconds of a woman crossing an empty ferry terminal at 4 a.m. Boarded shot-for-shot so the edit is locked before a single light gets rigged. Every frame below carries its action, its line and its camera move.

Director
Ines Halloran
Boards
M. Okonkwo
Format
2.39:1 · 24fps
Runtime
00:41 est.
Status
Approved for previs
SC. 14

INT. Ferry Terminal — Night

4 shots · 00:00 → 00:17
14A
Action
The hall is empty. NELL enters frame left, a duffel over one shoulder, and stops dead under the departures board.
Dialogue
Nell (V.O.)“Four in the morning is the only honest hour.”
Camera
Locked wide, 24mm. Hold 6s.
24mmPracticals only 0:00 — 0:06
14B
Action
The split-flap board clatters through its cycle. Every sailing reads CANCELLED except one: the 04:20 to Rannoch.
Dialogue
Tannoy“Final call. Final call for the four-twenty.”
Camera
Slow push in, 40mm → 4s ramp.
40mmSFX cue 0:06 — 0:10
14C
Action
Nell reads the board. Something behind her eyes settles — she has decided, and the decision costs her.
Dialogue
Nell“…Rannoch. Fine. Rannoch it is.”
Camera
Handheld MCU, 85mm. Breathe with her.
85mmHandheld 0:10 — 0:14
14D
Action
The duffel drops into a puddle of reflected sodium light. She does not pick it back up.
Dialogue
Silent. Room tone only.
Camera
Insert, 50mm macro, floor level.
50mmWater FX 0:14 — 0:17

Cut to

SC. 15

INT. Ticket Line — Continuous

3 shots · 00:17 → 00:29
15A
Action
A stanchion maze built for two hundred people holds exactly one. Nell walks the whole zigzag anyway.
Dialogue
Clerk“You could just duck under, love.”
Camera
Dolly right, matched to her pace.
32mmDolly0:17 — 0:22
15B
Action
Through scratched perspex: the clerk slides a paper ticket across. Nell's hand hovers before taking it.
Dialogue
Nell“One way. Don't print the return.”
Camera
OTS, 65mm, rack to the ticket.
65mmRack focus0:22 — 0:26
15C
Action
04:18. Two minutes. The second hand is the loudest thing in the building.
Dialogue
No dialogue. Tick sits forward in the mix.
Camera
Low angle static, 18mm. Two beats.
18mmStatic0:26 — 0:29

Match cut on the second hand

SC. 16

EXT. The Gangway — Night

2 shots · 00:29 → 00:41
16A
Action
Nell is a black cut-out against the ferry's windows. Halfway across she pauses — then keeps going.
Dialogue
Deckhand (O.S.)“Last one. You're the last one.”
Camera
Crane down 3m, ends level with rail.
28mmCrane0:29 — 0:36
16B
Action
From the terminal roof: the ferry pulls out. Its wake widens until it touches both edges of frame, then nothing.
Dialogue
Nell (V.O.)“Nobody watches you leave at four in the morning.”
Camera
Locked EWS, 200mm. Fade to black over 3s.
200mmFade out0:36 — 0:41

Fade to black · End of reel

Shooting order

Boards run in story order; the floor runs in this one. Two nights on the terminal permit.

Unit A · Nights 3 & 4
ShotSetupLensMoveNight
14AHall wide24mmLockedN3
14BDepartures board40mmPush inN3
15CCeiling clock18mmLockedN3
14CNell close85mmHandheldN3
15AStanchion maze32mmDolly RN4
15BTicket window65mmRackN4
14DDuffel insert50mmLockedN4
16AGangway28mmCrane downN4
16BWake from roof200mmLockedN4